[Report This]Date: January 11 2018 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 41: anti-heroes pt 2
The cahpters about Emily gave us a nice peak inside her mind, I liked that.
Clyde and Jason are maybe a bit to fast to write off Mya as an ally, having an amazon to battle an amazon could come in handy.
I think the reason people really try so steer away from violent/cruel stories and to gentle is because after a certain point you really start to feel bad for the tortured main characters if the story is written very well. So basically, if your story is written well, people will complain about the violent/cruel parts.
Thank you for writing as always, and I am already looking forward to the next addition.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the Emily bit kind of serves to take the whole picture in a different direction when paired with how Jason and Clyde act and what Steve and Malcolm add. Clyde never claimed to have model character but maybe Jason doesnt either. Or he could be over-exaggerating how mean or at least how out of line Emily actually was before he shrunk. Who knows.
Thank you for the review. Much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2018 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 41: anti-heroes pt 2
Damn, knew it was a bad idea for them to all help go after Emily. That poison ivy's a bitch.
You do a good job of showing both sides of the argument. Emily and her goons are definitely wrong for how they treat people but Jason and Clyde are a bit self absorbed themselves.
Still need to unearth Myas story in all this.
Sorry if I scared off any reviewers but I don't think thats really the cause of it. The violent stories just don't do well on this site, more heavily supported by gentle fans. Or the violent fans are just more of the lurking type I should say, since its obviously being read a ton.
Ironically this story started out heavy in violent gts action but evolved into a great adventure. I normally don't like so much actual story in my fetish stories, lol. This one is pretty great though.
Author's Response:
I don't blame you for any reviewers. I was right there with you during that. It wasn't that people can't not like my stories, it was just his problem with the whole thing was just kind of odd to me. Admittedly though, that guy made me look at where I was going and try to elevate it to a different height. I thank him for it.
There is more Mya stuff coming in the next couple chapters. She still has a big part to play. Everyone does as I'm figuring out how to end this. I've got a few more set ups I need to tidy.