Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 29: Something beneath the surface

I wonder if Emily suspects she is being set up. I love the plans you lay out, like Jasons escape with the help of Rachel and now this one. Creative. 

 

I admire their will to fight but somehow this seems like a bad idea, if they actually succeed in covering Emily in that stuff *shudder*

 

And I dont know why but for some reason I dont think Jason will be all that safe at Myas, maybe Emily has that figured out. 

 

Speaking of Mya, she may dole out the worst punishments on Jason of all of them if he gets on her bad side, wow. 

Author's Response:

It would be some crazy story telling if Emily was able to triple or quadruple cross them.  I'm unfortunately not that good yet, but I had fun writing the next few chapters.  Introducing some more new ideas and leads.