Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 25: Dark knights pt.1

This story has turned into quite an adventure! It's a shame more people arent giving it the accolades it deserves but, 53,000 reads, so its definitely being enjoyed.

 

So now Im wondering Jasons parents did some experiments with Emily and her friends if Im following Clydes line of thoughts correctly. Or Emily took it upon herself when she was younger to snoop through her dads notes and carried it out on her own. 

 

Dream sequence is a nice touch, keep up the great work!

 

Author's Response:

Thank you again!  I always look forward to what you pick up on in the chapters.  You are on the right track, but at this point, I'm not even sure the details of everything yet.  It was just a seed I wanted to plant, and address it in a few chapters.