[Report This]Date: November 02 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 21: foe or friend
Ah, ok, in regards to your response to my last review, makes more sense about Emilys reaction.
Jason really doesnt like Mya, really must be bitter rivals. She's not flat out rescuing him but shes not blowing him out of the water either. I'd say shes mostly friend but still putting herself first.
I figured his rescue was already well under way though, he got to his phone so he contacted someone. Then again, maybe he’s worried about surviving until he’s rescued!
Author's Response:
Not a bad assessment on your part. It isn't that they are bitter rivals outside of this situation really. He is just upset that she says she cares about his mental health, but then turns around and plans to help screw him over. She is overall smarter than him in every field though. He looked at her more as an obstacle to overcome when he was full size.
As for the rest, you'll have to wait and see. I might be taking it beyond where people think it will span.