[Report This]Date: October 26 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 16: the hills have eyes
*sigh* Never fails. There are so few stories of this nature that are actually written well on this site and any time there is one, a person like Defiad comes along to spew his hate for the genre and try and ruin it for those of us that like it. I cant even read gentle stuff anymore as it just makes me want to vomit but I don’t go around to all the gentle stories pissing on the author and his story. Why? Because its rude to criticize a story just because it doesn’t cater to your fetish. Go read the zillions of gentle crap stories on here if this one isn’t your cup of tea.
Fortunately, you don’t seem to be the fragile author type that stops writing after such criticism. As I have said, this story is very well written and despite Defids naivety that there are no people in the world who do unsavory things, there unfortunately are but seeing as this is just fiction and no one is actually getting hurt, it has been a very enjoyable read and one that totally feeds my attraction to the shrinking fantasy. Emily is a great giantess!
Rant over. Back to the story. I don’t know what their escape plan is they but better hurry, Emily took it up a notch there, might not make it until his parents get back. Of course, Im not actually rooting for team Jason and Rachel *weg*
Author's Response:
It's all good, I respect people's opinions and it gives me something to think about. The thing is, I can't say much without spoilers. All I can say is keep reading if you like any one element of this. I try to post every other day but I might drop another tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 16: the hills have eyes
It really is disappointing that the vast majority of giantess/shrink fiction is filled with sociopathic to psychopathic characters. Your story, while fairly well written in terms of prose and vocabulary seems very shallow to me as just torture porn. But that might just be me, I've read so far hoping that some kind of interesting story dynamic might hit or ya know, the characters would act like actual humans, but sadly it is a hit and a miss. Instead, all I've seen is "Jason tries to be reasonable/tries to escape his sadistic tormentors. He fails, he gets beaten the shit out of him by people who are supposed to love him." over and over and over.
Author's Response:
I appreciate an honest opinion, although it would be a pretty short story if things just worked out. If characters don't hit a low, then any rise means nothing. You're right that there is really only a couple sides to the fetish, but what would be the point of having large size without the power that would come with it? That being said, I am working towards something bigger.
Thank you though. Any comment or review is better than nothing.