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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 10 a slip of the tongue.

I think you're doing fine with it. The little battle he and Kylie had was good, strong but not enough to beat her and certainly not enought to beat Emily. The durable aspect is the most important part for me, Im not a big fan of the tinies winning. 

 

Close call there being found by Emily, I dont think his luck will last much longer! 

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