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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Incarceration

This is a fantastic beginning. Loved the guard playfully pulling on the chain and her role in the demise of little peterson. The Governess is awesome. Love the mature lady taking control. Loved her casually shrinking him. Wish I was there.
Maybe the little men should answer their new mentors and the Governess with Yes Ma'am to show proper respect. This story will be in my favorites.
Love it,
Diesel

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Incarceration

Dunno about Bradley, but I sure as hell am I excited to meet these mentors. 

I like the prison setting, it's unique and leaves me wondering why exactly Bradley was incarcerated in the first place. I'm also curious to see this mentor. So many possibilities.

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Incarceration

Really interesting premise, can't wait to read more. I hope you make good use of the foot tag

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