Date: May 07 2018 8:09 AM Title: Introductions are in Order
When Becca was in paige stomach and she bent over making becca flip in her stomach was genus. But maybe a little more on detail what Paige feels would be nice.
Only thing criticism I have, perfect other wise
Easy enough to change. Generally, I try to avoid time overlap between scenes but I can make it work.
Date: May 07 2018 8:05 AM Title: Introductions are in Order
This story is like a really good movie that some how no one hears about when it first comes out. The one best stories ever.
I have more, but only three on here at present. It is difficult to muster up the will to work continuously on the same project given the content, so I have a bunch that are all very slowly progressing.
Date: May 07 2018 7:58 AM Title: Introductions are in Order
I love the concept of the story, so new and brilliant. Honestly the most exciting and refreshing story on here. Have it saved and serious can not wait for more. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for the kind words! I'm still writing over here. It's slow but I'm still doing it.
Date: May 04 2018 5:54 PM Title: The First Lesson is Always the Hardest
Really like it so far! Any plans for an anal insertion chapter?
There actually was already one in the handwritten version. It didn't fit with the sequence nor with the character, so I moved it to the right.
Haven't gotten there yet.
Date: May 04 2018 1:24 AM Title: The First Lesson is Always the Hardest
Yeesh you weren't kidding about that being disturbing. I was thinking ultra kinky sex toy or gorey violence, not bestiality. That girl is crazy.
High and right. I needed a truly fucked-up character to do to Becca what I needed done. Holly's trade makes her comfortable with sex but she clearly has boundaries. Paige does not.
Date: February 07 2018 7:23 AM Title: The Other Shoe Drops
This last one was kinda boring and a tease, can't wait for the next one. Could it have more butt stuff, since I read the first one I've been on excited for. Vore her up her butt! :D
The stories that have character development get all the reads. I'm trying my hand at it.
Date: February 01 2018 1:54 PM Title: The Other Shoe Drops
Ohh your good, more please
this one good the whole idea awesome but this one alittle short on excitement. cant wait
Please have some ass place, only fair that she get shoved up holly butt for what she did.
That and maybe trip threw her body be hot most please bum for sure
There's anal in here somewhere. I can't find it but I do remember writing it.
My handwriting is hard to read.
Date: December 31 2017 8:18 AM Title: Three's a Crowd
More please! I love what you done so far. I check almost everyday for update
That's really nice of you to say! I am an unreliable writer, if not indicated by the fact that it took me five months to respond to you.
I'm working on it.
Date: November 29 2017 10:28 AM Title: Three's a Crowd
Great chapter, wonder if Holly is going to have to deal with Becca's eggs, while in the womb, and if this is the last stop for her, while the others have to get a new toy from Xmart. Hope so I love unbirth stories.
Unfortunately, that kind of situation is not within my purview. I do recklessly abuse human anatomy in this story, but I do not consider interacting with ova to be realistic given the size of the characters.
In any case, the focus of this story is the intimacy of deliberatlely sexual actions. Leaving Holly eternally in the body of a giantess doesn't quite fit the theme.
Date: November 08 2017 9:46 PM Title: Challenge Accepted
Wish I could find more like this.
Could the next one be about anal be so hot
Thanks for the kind words.
If I recall, I've got some anal later on. This is a lot of pen-and-ink I'm transcribing to the computer, and some of the original material I put to paper may have been inappropriate for this forum, so I have to do a lot of editing.
Date: October 01 2017 6:10 AM Title: Introductions are in Order
Great idea for a story! Can't wait to see next chapter, love sorority based stories.
The sorority was a great starting point, but I'm going to get a bit more personal later on. I hope you enjoy it anyway!