Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 18...First Shot Fired Pt. 2

Wow, another action packed set of chapters! The invasion by the Final Heaven agents was very dramatic. Nice job on the battle scenes and all the various forms of magic. I liked Keith's trick using the girl to sabotage the Mogwai government. The final scene with the torture and killing of the family in the frozen yogurt was a bit too disturbing for me but it certainly established the ruthlessness of the villains.