Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2018 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 12...The Yaksha Pt. 2

I've been busy so I'm just now catching up on this story. I've only read through the Yaksha chapters so far. These are legends I'm not as familiar with. I think I've heard of Yaksha but don't remember much about them. And Mogwai I only know from the Gremlins movies (your version will no doubt be quite different). 

 

In any case, the miniature hidden city was very cool and the battle with the snake was quite dramatic. Nice to see that Keith has a potential mate with Lawan. A good solution for the love triangle he seems to be stuck in. But will Ebony's plot ruin their best laid plans?

Author's Response:

I enjoy reading your reviews. As for Ebony...let's just say she won't be just sitting around.