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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 01 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 10 Chaos

I almost hate to say it, dude. But, this story _urgently_ needs re-editing, from beginning to end! double-spacing between paragraphs. Plus, much more legible separation of narrative text from character dialogue.

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