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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Its sweeter than I expected. Is there supposed to be a race of tiny people or is the cop able to shrink people? 



Author's Response:

Homunculi are a race of tiny people. Hominem are normal sized. Thx for the review.

Reviewer: SuperD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

A lovely sweet smutty tale. The sense of perspective between the two was handled really well and I thought the story was perfectly paced. Well done on a great one shot.

 

Hope you will be okay with Hurricane Irma, take care and stay safe.

Reviewer: thebestthing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

I do hope you survive.

If you don't survive then too bad. Thats life.

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