Date: September 08 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK! Let me be the first to welcome you to this website. And as this is your very first story, let me be your very first reviewer. One-shots are a very rare occurrence on this website. Probably because it's so difficult to set up the protagonists and antagonists in only one chapter. But, you have not only managed to overcome that difficulty. You also made things relatively fast-paced and action-packed!
What I loved most of all was how you did such a nice job making Jerrika the
polar opposite of her plagiaristic aunt. She proved so lovable and sympathetic that I actually hope she and Double-T get together in a sequel!
So, once again, welcome to the club.
Carycomic, I am Ace Corona, Samuel Orona is my real name. I'm getting close to publishing my first comic book (hopefully within the next year) so I started using my real name in case I need to deal with publishers or agents.
I plan on publishing my comic books through Amazon Kindle. This story is based on "Escape Attempt," a story I wrote in 2001 under the Ace Corona name. Thanks for the kind review!