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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Power and Control

When it says "I was dominate" do you mean:

1. "I was dominant"

or

2. "I was a dominatrix"

Or something else. Since it doesn't make sense as it's written currently.



Author's Response: Shit, good call, sometimes I get so rushed that I miss a lot of these errors! Thank you

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Power and Control

Can't wait to see what she does to the city! Love your stories!



Author's Response: She might be even more evil than any other character I've written.. which is pretty bad for the city

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