Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Kristi's Clitoris

I don't know how I missed this before. But, it's so well-written that I tore through all five chapters in one reading!
So, I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for chapter 6.

Reviewer: LittleMini Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 3: Meet my foot, little man

Good size difference. I hope one of them step on James. My favorite Christine so I hope she do it

Reviewer: LittleMini Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Very nice hot girls

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

This is my fave chapter so far. It was nice to see Kristi show some dominance. She pretty much raped James lol. I hope this becomes a regulr thing between them.

I love how Christine has no respect for James or any regard for his safety. I might be the only one but i kind of want to see her do some real damage to James.

This trip to the beach is going to be fun, I'm sure. I'm really excited to meet this London girl. I didn't think any characters would be taller than Christine. I'm glad she has a "similar personality" to Christine. I hope she tortures little pathetic James even worse than Christine. And I hope something serious happens with Mandy soon!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4: Kissable Kristi

I'm glad i chose Kristi. Girl knows how to flirt. Also, she doesn't treat him like trash.

Interesting twist this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: Beer Pong Problems

Intense. It seemes like Christine gets some kind of pleasure out of humiliating James. Wonder what she's going to do with him in the future

Reviewer: SinisterDeviant Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kissable Kristi

Wow. Kristi really stepped up this chapter. I liked Mandy a lot but think i like Kristi more now.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Meet my foot, little man

Well, that was a hot chapter. Being trapped between an ass and a crotch of 2 girls. Amazing!

I find John silly. Christine obviously is flirty in her nature, not becuase she likes James. She is too playful that John misreads this as a cue that she likes James. She says he is cute becuase he is tiny, that's all.

Kristi acting like the adult she is. I like that. I know she has a sexy side and I'm looking forward to that as well as other characters.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Well I'm going go with Kristi. I prefer a girl with smaller breasts and ass compared to most guys. When you are shrunk, every ass seems enourmous anyways.

With Kristi being the older one, makes me feel more comfortable doing things with her. Also, she is the shy one which makes her more mysterious than Mandy in my opinion. Christine seems like that super friendly girl who probably acts like this around every guy.

Of these 3 girls, I chose Kristi. Not to mention that she also has a toned ass which makes me believe that she is fit, and I find that very attractive.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Beer Pong Problems

I need to see more of these girls. None of them really strike me as the sexy type. Christine has been given the most time with James, Mandy has some ideas, and Kristi seems like that cute girl that sounds fun to be with.

In addition, they are all underage which kinda dissapoints me. If there was a sexy mom, maybe Mrs Leah or some equivalent, then I would vote for her.

Otherwise, it's hard to vote for me. The girls kinda feel the same.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Maybe i didnt do a good job on the character description. Maybe this will govr you a better idea Kristi - 19 years old. Italian descent. Long blonde hair, green eyes. 11'8. Thin with small breasts, moderate sized, toned ass. Mandy - 15 years old. Puerto Rican descent. Long dyed red hair, grey eyes. 13'8. Thin with huge breasts, moderate sized ass. Christine - 17 years old. Russian descent. Long brown hair, brown eyes. 14'2. Semi-muscular, small waist but thick. Large breasts, large thighs and huge ass. There will be more character description as we get deeper into the story. Also, there will be other featured characters, some of them will be older.

Author's Response: Maybe i didnt do a good job on the character description. Maybe this will govr you a better idea Kristi - 19 years old. Italian descent. Long blonde hair, green eyes. 11'8. Thin with small breasts, moderate sized, toned ass. Mandy - 15 years old. Puerto Rican descent. Long dyed red hair, grey eyes. 13'8. Thin with huge breasts, moderate sized ass. Christine - 17 years old. Russian descent. Long brown hair, brown eyes. 14'2. Semi-muscular, small waist but thick. Large breasts, large thighs and huge ass. There will be more character description as we get deeper into the story. Also, there will be other featured characters, some of them will be older.