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Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2018 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Hmmm, interesting. I'm no lawyer, but doesn't rape or assault have to do with abuse of power or authority? In a fictional world with sexual dimorphism in humans, would'nt size play a role? I mean, say James was an inch in height, and women were normally 6 feet tall,hypothetically, wouldn't that somehow influence a judge or court to decide who was responsible for an abuse of power (rape/ assault?) Its not like James could easily defend himself against women like that?

 

Am I completely off base here or is there some grounds for my point rationally?



Author's Response: Youve got a good point. My reason for portraying the scenario the way that I did was, not only to make a comment about how similar cases are handled in my country today, but also to increase the readers pleasure by making James in even less control of his life and displaying how pathetic he is by accentuating the fact that Mandy is so much taller than him, yet so much younger. Doesnt seem like you enjoyed this chapter because you got hung up on this one detail. Sorry about that. Putting them in jail would kind of ruin the story...

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2018 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Hmmm, so either Christine goes to jail (what should be the case logically) or James gets accused of statutory (IRL that would make sense but given the size difference/power dynamic swap in the story's fictional world, one would think that the larger woman would be considered the abuser, however, is James the only tiny guy in the fictional world, or his size more common? I suppose if he is a medical rarity, then James being accused of statutory and not Mandy would make more sense...)

 

All very interesting philosophical questions to ponder, if such a reality existed.



Author's Response: Males average over nine feet tall in this reality. James is the shortest man in the world. Statutory doesn't account for size difference.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 13: London's Gift

What an awesome chapter!

I love how long it was. This chapter alone felt like an entire story. It was an adventure!

Even though I like Christine, I'm kinda glad that he got transferred to another woman. I was hoping Stefani would get hold of him, but London works also.

I love that he got his birthday gift from her! I actually had the same fetish when I was smaller, and I had a teacher that had a large ass like that. Of course, I can't really ask that. Might be trouble.

Still, I love the ideas going on in this story. The porn videos, the teddy bear, London sitting on him are all excellent. I wonder if James is small enough to fit in London's pants? Imagine London forced to hide James down the front of her pants/panties. Might be a nice snug fit for him.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: That is a great idea. James will be with London for some time, while they figure out how to get him back to Kristi without her being suspicious

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 13: London's Gift

Ok, so just to be clear, Christine is the abusive one right? I just want to be sure I remember who is who. Other than that, I have no idea why James would lie about Mandy being the abusive one, when Christine is. London is totally right, James has Stockholm syndrome, he's fallen faor his abuser, which is not good. I hope someone realizes how crazy Christine is so that she can go to jail, and James can go to therapy...



Author's Response: Yes. Christine is the ring leader and Mandy is the sidekick. I shouldve made James' reasoning more clear. 1) James is more terrified of Christine than Mandy. 2) He figures that London is less likely to snitch on Mandy than Christine, because Mandy is underage. If he has informed London of Christine's actions, she could be charged with rape because she's an adult. Whereas, James is a grown man and Mandy is a highschool sophomore. So technically, it is statutory rape on James's part. Since London is his friend, he expects her to keep quiet about it, as he could be considered at fault.

Reviewer: johnrussi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 13: London's Gift

Being sat on? James is really living the dream. This was an incredibly erotic read. I just can't wait to see if London and James end up spending more time together somehow~ 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: Taking Christine's Virginity

Christine is truly thinking with her dildo. If she didn't want James crying out in pain, she should have gagged him with a scrap of Scotch tape (or something equivalent)!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 12: Taking Christine's Virginity

Not exactly a big fan of Mandy, but she did well this chapter.

How does Mandy know what cum even tastes like? She is too young. Also, There are sex dolls that spurt out liquid, so I was surprised that Mandy was able to figure James out so quickly.

Christine seems kinda dumb this chapter. She knows that James will burst with Mandy. Especially after the pill she gave him. Christine didn't even come up with an excuse to make it seem fake. Seems like James squirting was a surprise to her which feels off.

I preferred the one on one moments with James. When there are multiple girls with James, scenes tend to get really crazy, but alone with 1 girl makes things more intimate.

What I loved about the last chapter was that James was a prisoner sex slave for Christine and had no chance for escaping. Now Mandy is here and it looks like she will mess everything, spoiling Christine's secret.

I'm not sure where you are going with this, but it's nonetheless interesting.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thats true but as you said, Mandy is realy young so so probably wouldnt know about that. Also, she pretty much just took a guess that James was in the teddy bear, based on what she knows about Christine

Reviewer: goldstar248 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 11: Goddess Christine

option 1)

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

can i at least get a comment on my stories. Maybe a hi. I want to fix and improve my stories.

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Karien vore has great you tube videos. I have a story idea if you want it. ZOMBIE GIANTESS. Im not into zombies but if you want to think about go for it.

Reviewer: Billysantos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2017 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Goddess Christine

Holy shit. That was intense. I just read all 11 chapters in one shot. Cant wait for more!! And I would like to see London save him and maybe have her way with him like Christine does

Reviewer: CharityCasey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 11: Goddess Christine

Christine finally did what I knew she was capable of!! 10/10!! Please let Beba rescue James and then accidentally sit on him!!

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 11: Goddess Christine

So hot. Christine has no mercy and I love her for it!!! Your chapters never disappoint!!

I'd like to see London rescue him but I'd also like her to have a little fun with James. It would also be cool to see Mandy rescue him, but I know thats not an option

Reviewer: DinaDonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 11: Goddess Christine

Mmmmm. I would love to me Christine in this chapter. Amazing story so far!

I'd like to see London rescue James since she's the tallest and I think she's the sexiest.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: Goddess Christine

I agree with John. Christine's mom could make an appearance and toy with James. I'm not much of a fan of those 3 ladies at the salon, so I think Christine's mom could be that person to "rescue" him. Perhaps, she can be that naughty milf who taught Christine her sexy ways.

Wow! I actually watch giantess porn vids that are basically what this chapter is completely about. Butt crush and boob crush is part of them. However, there is a lack of pussy crush or smother in those videos. I was hoping when James was level with Christine's vagina, I thought she would smother him with it.

I love the use of the tape to hold James down. It's like giantess bondage. Many videos I have watched show a giantess thing a man to a chair and she slowly squats down as the camera watches the ass get slowly larger and bigger until it covers the entire screen.

Also, the glass wall is nice too. Not only can it capture the tiny's facial expressions, but it also shows how her ass or any other body parts smothers the tiny guy very clearly. Without the glass, we just see the body disappear, but with cameras on the other side, we can see the body being crushed by this giantess.

I also watch the city desctruction videos, but I only watch them for when the giantess toys with the citizens. When, the eat, step, or sit on those guys, I smile. However, the best things they do are when they place a tiny man in her cleavage, or even better, the front of her panties. Only problem is that most giantess videos don't even have that.

Christine's little kidnapping speech reminded me of that orphanage lady from Leggy Leah who was taking care of James until she decided to control him and be evil. However, Christine's version here is much more sexier. Yes, I am one of those people who would love to be in James's position right now.

Love the creativity of this chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

(Can I get some responses to my reviews? Haven't got one for the last 3 chapters.) thanks!

Author's Response: Glad youre enjoying it. Christine is full of ideas for torturing James. She's about as ruthless as they come. It doesnt look like James will ever have a normal life again

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

These are the kind of reviews i want. I am pregnet with my exs baby after he raped me. These stories help me deal with the stress.

Author's Response: If you wanna talk about it, you can text me. I'm a psychologist. I can help free of charge. Email me at dankizard7@gmail.com and I'll give you my cell number. Also, new chapter coming in a few hours!

Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 10: Christine's Teddy Bear

Wooo another amazing chapter! I swear I don't know how you are able to manage to out due the previous chapter. This chapter was so hot! I'm jealous that James manage to get a job like that and be surrounded by beautiful women no less! And now he is in the hands of Christine.

This is a tough decision, there is so many possibilities with who can save James. All the options are great, maybe the new character can be Christine's mother, randomly cleaning her room and comes across James in the teddy bear suit. And with Beba, I like how you mentioned how she doesn't really see him as a man but more of a baby and that could lead to something interesting. And Tanya saving James would definitely be fun to see and maybe James will be taken to her home for a bit to "recover" from his experience.

I guess I would go with a new character or Tanya. However who ever ends up saving James, I'm sure it would be amazing.

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: goldstar248 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2017 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 10: Christine's Teddy Bear

great, i'd like that london save him, you are doing a very good job

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

are you going to finish legea leaha



Author's Response: Yes. I have two more chapters to write for this story, then I will return to Leggy Leah for a few chapters

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2017 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

can send a pic of my stomach if you want.

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