Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2018 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15: Christine Gets Her Toy Back

Reading the title, I thought that Christine was going to steal James off the front porch.

Doesn't Stefani have cameras in her salon? I thought she would have done that when everyone was searching for him.

How did Christine know James was missing? It sounded like she told Kristi and Stefani which means that Christine knew that James was missing before Stefani. Doesn't that seem odd?

Personally, I think there are too many boob hugs. You could have at least different kinds of boob hugs. Maybe someone hugs James and he gets stuck in her cleavage or something. Every woman hugged him the same way.

The sex scene with Kristi felt as if you deleted some sentences in between. He was left in her thong, but was still able to see her breasts. Was she still holding her thong away from her body? Even when she let her hair flow? I just want another description of where her hands were in this scene.

Lemme guess. Christine leaves the house with James and the same plot happens over again.

I hope not. I would love to see Stefani get some time with James. Maybe one more sexual this time and not just the typical cleansing like the 1st one.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Nope, there were no cameras when Christine kidnapped James from the salon. Christine knew James was missing because he was no longer in her room, where she left him. Remember? He fell into London’s bag and she left with him. Kristi dropped him into her thong so that the thong would hold him while she removed her scrunchy. While they had sex, her hands rested along his back, as well as with her thumb over his chest. I will take your advice into consideration for furute chapters. Thanks for the feedback!