Not exactly a big fan of Mandy, but she did well this chapter.

How does Mandy know what cum even tastes like? She is too young. Also, There are sex dolls that spurt out liquid, so I was surprised that Mandy was able to figure James out so quickly.

Christine seems kinda dumb this chapter. She knows that James will burst with Mandy. Especially after the pill she gave him. Christine didn't even come up with an excuse to make it seem fake. Seems like James squirting was a surprise to her which feels off.

I preferred the one on one moments with James. When there are multiple girls with James, scenes tend to get really crazy, but alone with 1 girl makes things more intimate.

What I loved about the last chapter was that James was a prisoner sex slave for Christine and had no chance for escaping. Now Mandy is here and it looks like she will mess everything, spoiling Christine's secret.

I'm not sure where you are going with this, but it's nonetheless interesting.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thats true but as you said, Mandy is realy young so so probably wouldnt know about that. Also, she pretty much just took a guess that James was in the teddy bear, based on what she knows about Christine