Date: September 20 2020 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was horrible
Date: November 24 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
I don't think reading about murdering a defenseless boy bye a sick mother and family makes a good story IM glad I am don't like that I might be a lot of things but I am not that
Author's Response:
Well, the subject isn't for everyone
Date: August 31 2017 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
As odd as a son-brother versus mom-sister story is to me, this was written in a rather intriguing fashion. One was always wondering what would happen next, and next, and next. Ignoring the family relation aspect, well my personal hang-up with that, it was quite entertaining.
Author's Response:
I can understand how this may not be everyone's jam due to the family connections. Glad you liked it despite
[Report This]Date: August 30 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, I certainly couldn't pass this one up. I think I know where Paul's Wonderland is. It's that sweet spot between lust and embarrassment, and your crafted prose put me right there beside him. Seriously, you brought me out of the abstract appreciation of the scenario, and into his conflicted mind as he steps out from beneath that couch. Nice allusions to the source material, too.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks much. Glad you felt engaged
[Report This]Date: August 29 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really liked what you did with the last chapter in particular. Neat little story, very out of the box theme.
Author's Response:
I aim to please
[Report This]Date: August 29 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is a fantastic addition to the queensville universe. Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
Thanks; glad you liked it
Date: August 28 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have to admit, I see why he'd like women in dresses and petticoats so much. Especially after seeing the great pictures DW posted. It's been a fun story so far.
Author's Response:
I'm sure plenty in the community would have the same weaknesses as Paul in this story
Date: August 25 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
My timesink^whobby when I'm waiting for the next chapter: figuring out alternative endings.
They've been mandatory in Queensville stories for almost a year now, you know... ;)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Hopefully it's not a disappointment to hear there's only one ending to this one, though there's plenty of fun to come before that ending.
Date: August 24 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Once again you written another fascinating story. Looking forward to more like your other stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: August 24 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Once again you written another fascinating story. Looking forward to more like your other stories.
Date: August 24 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a huge fan of Queensville (cough cough), any new picture or story is good news;
I trust a story from you is going to be great news, as usual :)
Iirc(*) it's also the first time I notice you take commissions - now that's something I'll have to remember.
(*) I'll admit it took me a few seconds to understand that "oh, no, not again", but in my defense I've always heard it in my language...
Cough cough indeed. If you're a fan of QueensVILLE, you'll hopefully dig this story. I've technically been open to commissions for a while but have never really attempted to advertise it until now.
Author's Response:
Date: August 23 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start; but his mother and sisters??? Still, plenty of other women in the room. Regardless, it will fun to see where this goes no matter who gets their hands on him. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Hehe. The story beats, relationships to other characters, etc, were chosen by the commissioner. There will be several hands on him before the story is complete.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2017 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hell yea i loved this! its Molotov's fault that i developed a petticoat fetish... Super exited he got you to write him a story!
Author's Response:
Well then sounds like this story will be up your alle