Reviews For Shattered Life
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Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2017 7:47 PM Title: Adjusting

Good start and introducing the plot was good. If u need ideas I say make a person walking by blow or kick him on a chair where he is sat on or between a persons legs

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2017 12:48 PM Title: Adjusting

Pretty nice story, love the details. Hoping he gets caught in some uncomfortable places. Will there be focus on feet, specifically odor?



Author's Response: Thanks for the positivity! I'm making it up as I go along mostly, but I've never been a fan of odor so probably not.

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