Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Cool chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

..................She can't even eat food now. It's really all in her head at this point. Day one shrunken Nancy would've eaten that waffle like a champ. Twerp with her badass sock fur I really want to draw and her obedience training can't because Peyton doesn't want her to. At least that's what I think. I'm noticing the more Nancy believes she's a pet the more her body changes to accept that. I wonder how much of that is from the effects of the shrink itself?

I'm not giving up on Twerp but I wonder if she won't give up on herself? Nancy's still in there I hope she wins and that winning won't cost her, her life. Geez there's just too much to talk about with this story! Like is the relationship with Peyton worth having if Nancy loses herself in the process? Nancy wanted a daughter but Twerp only has a master so it would be very tragic that Nancy only gets the love of a daughter after she's too far gone to recognize it. And what does Peyton want???? What the fuck was that whole "Did you mean what you said?" thing? She can't have it both ways. If she just want another pet that looks similar to a human then fine, but she's actually killing the person known as Nancy. Which I have to believe is someone Peyton cares for. And maybe one day Nancy will be gone forever and all she'll have is little Twerp and she'll have to decide if that was worth it?

Y'know what? This was too long a comment. I'm just gonna shut up on this for awhile. 5 out of 5 or whatever the scoring system is..ten points to Slytherin?