Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

Greetings from a long time lurker!

This is my first review so I am not sure where to even start. Maybe from the beginning: it made me register and write a review... and no story has ever held such power over me...

That really was not the beginning. The beginning did not pique my immediate interest. The writing style and pacing were excellent (which is to be expected from an experienced author), but the setting was fairly typical and it weighted heavily on your story. Many well-written stories (with similar setup) were posted on this site only to lose their spark along the way and I worried yours might share their fate.

Fortunately, as the story progressed it seemed better and better. The characters were believable and lifelike, flawed but not...evil. Their motivations also were rational and understandable and interactions between them (characters) - simply amazing. By the time you posted the 10th chapter, your story had already been among my favourites. Then came chapter 11 and left me speechless. I cannot say much more, it is a masterpiece and possibly the best single chapter I have read on this site (and any other). You have mentioned the time investment put into creating it, rest assured it was totally worth it. I leave my review without rating, as I believe 10/10 just would not do it justice. I can only hope the remaining chapters will be on par with it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hearing your sincere and kind words makes all the writing and edits worthwhile. Hearing how much you enjoy the chapter and story is so rewarding as author. Thank you for taking the time to review. I am truly humbled by your kind words.

Reviewer: TheDARGX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2017 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow! Peyton is just the most evil, awesome, greatest girl in the world!!! Holy crap what a chapter!!! This is amazing and the only bad thing about this is knowing it ends soon :( lol keep up the great work my friend! Cheers!

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oof! Rough break Nancy. It's weirdly sweet in a way. You really nail the duality of Peyton's abuse which is what makes her a great character. Sewing your stepmom to a dirty sock is so incredibly cruel but it's also just to keep her warm which is probably the nicest thing Peyton's ever done for her.

I just hope it doesn't look too bad. I'll trust in Peyton's sewing skills and the fact that it's literally becoming her skin that's it's not some hatchet job. Craftsmanship! It's not too much for a tiny to expect from her mistress! I don't know how Peyton would live with herself to let Twerp walk around like a hot mess. That reflects badly on YOU Peyton! Everyone would whisper about it behind your back. 

Anyway I hope Nancy comes to appreciate her fur and Peyton's generosity. She can still comeback from this. You'll get a bath again soon! It won't smell like aggressive gorilla sweat forever. A bit of colored dye and you'll be stylin and profiling! Furs objectively cooler than boring human skin and long hair's really just a hassle. Plus think of all the fun new hairstyles you get to experiment with as it grwows back! Anyway, fun chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it and I agree a bad sew job would reflect on Peyton. The duality in peyton is something I've worked hard at making sure is present. As I feel it's a defining part of who she is. The fact she hates her step mother but doesn't want to admit maybe there is some love thee as well. Thanks for replying hope you continue to enjoy