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Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Jackie

You know later on you should return to it.  "You know how much you loved me keelhalling you, I think we should try it again!"

 

I just really loved that idea, can't get it out of my head.



Author's Response:

I might do that stargate1000. This story will never be finished, so I'll keep it in mind. In the meantime Jackie has some other nasty things to do to him. 

Man, if being keel hauled by a giant woman were possible, what a thrill that would be.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 8: Keel-hauled by Jackie

Most inventive idea I've ever read!  Wish it would of gone on longer.  You kind of hit fast forward on the butt end.



Author's Response:

Thanks startgate1990. That is because of what Jackie has in store for him in the nextt chapter, in her butt.

Reviewer: TehZach Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Jackie

Love the idea of tough girls/bullies/tomboys being giantesses. I admit I am kind of put off by how many chapters it's taking to get to the good stuff though. But I just hope it will be worth the wait and not be over quickly. :) 



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm afraid  I do overdo the dramactic/suspenseful build up a bit too much, at times. But I don't think you will be disappointed this week. This story is going to be ongoing, that is, it will neve be complete. So that, while I'm working on other stories, thtis one will have chapters added from time to time -- after I reach a certain point.

Thanks for your remarks, TehZach.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Jackie

Never got to read the 1000 ways story, and I saved the other one but missing the last few chapters.  I liked the other story, so hopefully this one is just as good.



Author's Response:

I may bring 1000 back, except that now a lot of readers know the plot. This one is the beginning of a series of at least three stories, one of which will be posted under Bill Williams -- there is a reason for that. Thanks again for you remarks, stargate1990.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Jackie

Is this the same story, or is it different? Why delete everything?



Author's Response:

This will be basically the same stoty with a few different twists. Also it takes place in Ohio, instead of Pa.

Ther were two reasons why I deleted the stories. One was that I realized that a lot of readers were young and that bothered me. But I finally decided to go back to writing. The other reason was that i had three stories going at the same time and I was posting almost every day. I felt under pressure to keep up and was getting fruustrated.

This time I decided to work on only one story at a time and post only three days a week. This is for fun and one should never feel pressured.

If this story goes well, it will be the foundation for others I have in mind and, I hope, good stories.

Thanks for your interest, stargate 1990/

 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Jackie

I'm interested to see where this goes. Great start!

Author's Response:

Thank you, zbh. I plan to post chapters Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays.

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