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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2: Six Under

Nice chapter. I can see his frustration. Understandable. I would have liked more between the nurse and him. Maybe more when she towers over him. I liked the doctor will see you shortly. Nice using short with him.
I also wanted more from the doctor. Maybe blood tests, X-rays? She sounds like a fine character to look up to. Will the doctor start talking to Emma and ignore him like he was a child,
Great story,
Diesel

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