Date: January 11 2024 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Really miss reading your newest creations
[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Glad to see this back, one of your best stories!
Hope to see more updates!!
Date: September 16 2021 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
SOLE WRITER! Yeah, Im talking to you! Look, you see this crowd?? They love you, cant get enough! Take a bow! really, your on stage take a bow.
But much like the crowd loves you i love this story!I havent left a review yet, but i should have much sooner. I LOVE THIS STORY, like forreal i have read it prob like 10 times or more, who knows when this mind wanders.
Anyway i wont bore you too much longer, Just make sure you give yourself a pat on the back. The delivery, pacing, the foot content, I MEAN COME ON! it doesnt get better then this! the hot wife then the sneaky deal making friend. Just do me a favor... pat yourself on the back.......
Im waiting....
Did you do it?
Dont lie to me
Ok Ok i believe you!
But all jokes aside, i hope one day you can continue this story, I like it, I love it, I WANT SOME MORE OF IT
did you just sing that, cause I did.
Listen, i got $10 on 2 chapters and a gas station burrito, but i know all you really need is that burrito but cash helps too right?
Ok, Its late and im delirious talking to myself, AGAIN love this story, hope you are doing well in this crazy world and have time to do what you love.
PS HMU fam, the burrito is frozen but only keeps so long
Author's Response:
Wow, haha! You know how to get an author hyped to write a story. Given your enthusiasm, I will try and start another chapter for this. I think I have scrapped some prior ones in the past since they didn't seem to turn out right. I actually really enjoyed writing this but need to work on outlining the rest of this story and where to take it. Honestly its been so long, I think I forgot my original plan. Thanks for the review - things like this don't go unnoticed by authors.
Date: July 29 2017 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
This is such a good style of writing! I love the ratio of gentle, to feet, to good storytelling. Awesome.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading! I'll try to keep the balance 👍
[Report This]Date: July 28 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Good story so far. Will be interesting to see if Emma continues to see Kyle as her husband or if she begins to see him as more of a pet. Maybe have Emma and Janica go for a night on the town whether he likes it or not.
Date: July 28 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Very good chapter. Great set up. And we get to see Janicas sister as the new housekeeper and eventual babysitter. Will you do some characters that are demanding and authoritative. When he's smaller will he have to answer Yes Ma'am to a lady?
Thanks,
Diesel
Date: July 28 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Domino
Hello! You seen make a mistake. You post chapter two twice.
Author's Response: Thank you!