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Reviewer: Paris Green Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2017 11:36 AM Title: The risks of piracy

Glad to see you got back on the writing saddle!

Anyways, I think this is a pretty great story, unabashedly smutty and short and sweet. You do a good job with describing things to keep it all exciting without it being heavy handed or repetitive. It shows you have a very clear understanding of "less is more" in this story.

You also did a good job of packing in different ways for Julie to torment the little ones while keeping the chapters brief. I appreciate that you wrote it so the characters recognized the very real threat on their lives and the raw fear it's bundled with. They're all rather one dimensional as far as characters go but given this is a short and sweet, smut-n-snuff that isn't really a problem.

I often find it a bit silly when macros mistake the tinies for bugs (bugs aren't bipedal) but I think it fits with Julie here because she seems characterized as rather nearsighted, both literally and figuratively in that she so wrapped up in her own desires to notice small but glaring details.

Overall, great story! Good to have you back.



Author's Response: Paris! Nice to see you again ^^ thanks for all the compliments c': sure know how to make a girl feel special <3 thanks for all the lovely words c: I'd probably write deeper characters for a bigger story, thanks for your feedback!

Reviewer: Tiny Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2017 8:53 AM Title: The risks of piracy

I love this story.  I only read it just recently.  I really like the character interaction and plot.

I tried to send you a pm to your email.  Please let me know if you'd like to chat. :)

tinyjedi99@openmailbox.org



Author's Response: It's a big deal to me that you reviewed this, you're a big inspiration to me! I emailed you back, sorry for responding so slowly! I'm looking forward to your next venture into little sister seduction, or maybe a collab? It'd be a dream come true <3

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2017 12:40 AM Title: The risks of piracy

Oooh, this is sadistic, I love it!

My only thing would be to let them be broken more psychollogically. I think the fear is extremely important but in this story it moves a little too fast and though it's said it's not felt.

Looking forward to the last bit, though!

Reviewer: Gizmo2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 11:49 AM Title: The risks of piracy

As with the previous chapter I'd love to see an ass chapter too. It's been amazing so far, and I think your writing style would lend itself well to that. An innocent, unaware fart would be amazing...

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 10:45 AM Title: The risks of piracy

Brilliant. Asian younger sister is truly the best genre.

I'd be excited to see the last one be dumped down the back of her panties, and perhaps for her to try to play the still-running video game, unknowingly reducing her brother even further as he struggles against the creases of her asshole.

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 11:13 PM Title: The risks of piracy

I really like the unaware genre aswell. Great start to the story. Could i request more unaware scenes involving fingers and hands? I like it when the giantess is really oblivious. Like if Julie stared at the tinies from super close up and still concluded that they were bugs.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 4:04 PM Title: The risks of piracy

wonderful start

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 7:26 AM Title: The risks of piracy

this sounded interesting but was a bit short

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