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Reviewer: Kool Bean Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2017 7:08 PM Title: Loose Ends

Hey, this is a really good story! I think that it's genuinely very well written, and its also the reason that I made this account, so that I could give this story a nice review! It has an interesting thing going for it with the innocent and malicious personalities which lets it cover the dynamic of either a gentle giantess or an evil giantess. I also love the scene in the 2nd chapter where Marissa realized that she was acting much more like her counterpart because its such an interesting development to witness, not to mention that it leaves the story very open for possible future chapters (if there are any). I'm personally a little sad that you want to end the story where it did but I can understand how you want to keep it as open ended for peoples imagination as possible. I'd love to see more chapters however, as I think I've made it quite clear that I think this is a good work of fiction. I wish the best of luck for You and hope to see more great work from you! 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 11:13 PM Title: Inner Demons

I remember when you sent me the scenes with Marissa, it was always hard to read because of the degree of cruelty of the scenes. Great job on your first story in over a year. 

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 4:15 PM Title: Inner Demons

Really good start to your story. I like it a lot. The premise is really cool, very reminiscent of a show that only aired one season on NBC back in 2013 called Do No Harm. I love that there's this one innocent personality completely devastated by what her alter-ego is doing. And now that she has Jeremy, I wonder what she will do. Will she try to nurse him back to health? Will she try to get him to understand her predicament? I'm eager to find out. Keep it up!

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 4:15 PM Title: Inner Demons

I loved this story!! I'm so hoping the next chapter isn't really the last chapter. This is one of the best reads I've read on this website and such an interesting concept. Can't wait to read the next chapter on Wednesday and hoping to see some more F/f action

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