What a hot way to end a chapter ;) lol

I think her job should be teacher or personal gym trainer. I love the story but I'm glad u r away from the sex

Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you love the story but its too bad the sex scenes weren't your thing... I like to have a little bit of everything in my story so there's something for everyone. My next chapter will include unbirthimg and crushing but please feel free to skip that and go to the chapter next week! But feel free to add a comment with the things you do like and add something you'd like to see more of and I'll add it :)

"Just kidding, I wouldn't flush my favorite sex toy down the drain".

Everything that Dianne says is sexy. I wish she talks more while she plays with Max. I think it improves every scene. Especially those scenes where you have big blocks or paragraphs, a few teasing insults by Dianne would be nice. I think that's why last chapter felt so good despite the male presence. They were talking dirty and I love it.

When Dianne calls Max a sex toy, I just think "what a lucky guy" and I would be honored to be her sex toy. What a goddess!

When Dianne wrapped Max with the floss, I was screaming with excitement! Now that was hot! Tied up and forced into her vagina! I would have preffered this happen in the morning so Dianne could take Max to work like this. Well, actually I think Dianne tying Max to the front her panties would be better for work, so she can play with him when she is stressed.

I love the diologue when Dianne was wrapping Max. "Can't have you sneaking off" and "my special prisoner tonight". So sexy! I wish she said goodnight Max a little later and maybe she says "tonight, you get a reward, you get to sleep with me." or "My husband filled my ass, and now I want you to fill my pussy." Or "mhmm, I love the way you squirm. It would useful for where you're going." Or "I know you want to escape, so I'm keeping you safe inside me". Or "the best way to even try escaping is to struggle in quick bursts" then after she inserts him, "mmhm, or that's the best way to become a human vibrator." Or "My ass had a good meal, but my vagina is still hungry" or "maybe you might like this kind of torture. After all, you admire my body". Or "This is where you belong, my favorite sex toy."

Man, even my own ideas are getting me excited.

As for her job, I was thinking about something strange since it's on a Sunday, and I thought what about a giantess film star. Dianne takes Max and they do erotic giantess photo shoots.

Or Dianne could be a yoga instructor, showing off her body wrapped up in sexy tight yoga pants.

Or Dianne could be worker at a sex toy shop and she tests several products with Max.

Or Dianne works at a massage salon and while she is working with her clients, Max is working inside her.

Or Dianne is a teacher, using authority on bad kids in detention.

Or speaking of authority, Dianne is that sexy cop who finds criminals and punishes them as her special prisoner like she did with Max.

There are many jobs that I think would be great for Dianne. I just hope that what ever her job may be, that she gets to play with Max and use him as a stress/sex toy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your continuous and awesome replies :D I appreciate your feedback and I will try to add more dialogue in the giant paragraphs and also try to add sexy remarks or teasing with Dianne and Max ;)