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Reviewer: Puka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Fall

I am read again, and it has never been better.  I know that you are very busy now, but i gope that in a future I will can read another history about a little Izellah that is sister . A little sis.

Reviewer: Puka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2018 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Fall

   Caro notsirk, como outra vez, eu vim dizer-lhe que é adorável a sua história; Izellah, Sabrina e outros. Mas por que? Por que você pára a história? Todos gostaram, tudo disse que foi excelente! Por favor, para mim e para os seus irmãos giantistas, continue! Você é um mestre nisso e sua nova idéia é boa. Sabrina cresce e não Izellah encolhe? Eu gosto! E você? Ou talvez, Small 2, onde Sabrina encontraria sua irmã e pegaria ela, ou ela escaparia, você quem sabe! Ir! Vai, meu irmão !!!



Author's Response:

Sorry Puka. I hate to break this to you but I do not speak uhhhh Spanish? Is this Spanish? I only know a bit i learned in high school years ago. Thank you for the comment I'll respond to your comments up above. 

Reviewer: Puka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2018 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Fall

   Dear notsirk, as another time, I came tell you that I lovely your story; Izellah, Sabrina and others. But why? Why you stop the story? All liked, all said that was excellent! Please, for me and for your brothers giantists, continue!! You is a master in this and your new idea is good. Sabrina grow and not Izellah shrink? I like! And you? Or maybe, Small 2, where Sabrina would find her sister and get her, or she escape, you who know! Go! Go, my brother!!!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Fall

I have to say that you did Real I R S proud. It was fun and well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Loved it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

You have been a great commentor diesel! And guess what? You're the only one who can recognize their direct influence on this story! Well except realRS. realRS is responsible for this story even existing........But you get the silver medal! Almost as good! Mrs. Nelson thanks you! Everyone else gets a dumb bronze one. They'll never know how their comments may have impacted my writing. Too bad for them. But they did help.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2017 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Fall

Sham? Not even close, this was amazing.

 

I would love to see more of Izzy/Sabrina's adventures down the road.



Author's Response:

Not a sham?! Validation!....Honestly I'm just overly critical of my work. It helps prevent disappointment but also means I'll never be happy. 0_0 

I too would love to read the continued adventures of Izzy and Sabrina. Someone should get to writing that..........Oh, I have to write it?!....dammit.

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Fall

Overall I really enjoyed the story I liked that Izzy did not just roll over and accept the fact that, she was small (no pun intended) and tried to be as independent as possible despite her size. 

I really liked the interactions between the Ivory family with Gloria adjusting to the fact that one of her daughters had shrunk and Sabrina having to become Izzy's protector in a world where anything could have caused her great harm

Can't wait to see what you do next.



Author's Response:

Thank Nodgfan. I'm glad people enjoyed my story. I hope you look forward to what comes next whatever it is and are still around whenever it happens......Maybe a non canon spin off where Sabrina grows instead of Izzellah shrinking? She'll still practice the same dominance over her "Little Sis" but with completely different context! Hrmmmmmm.....No that's dumb.

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