Date: September 22 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 12: Ivory vs Ivory
Possibly your best chapter yet. Loved izzys getting clean in the shower. Sabrina lifting her by her hair was an awesome display of power.
Gloria being answered with Yes Ma'am shows her ultimate power.
Love seeing Mrs. Nelson. She rules.
Will Miss Applegate handle either of the little people in her class? Love to see the little boy in her hands.
A fantastic chapter,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: September 15 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 12: Ivory vs Ivory
This was a really fun chapter, even if it wasn't quite as introspective as the previous one.
I'm still sad that the story is about to end though. Assuming the protagonists next will end up finding a compromise and making up, it would be nice to follow their lives and the evolution of their relationship for a longer time.
Author's Response:
Yes it would be very nice to do all those things I agree. :)
[Report This]Date: September 14 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 12: Ivory vs Ivory
One of the best stories I've had the pleasure of reading this year.
Author's Response:
Hey thank's Adam X.
Date: September 14 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: Ivory vs Ivory
Izzy's delusions continue to be a highlight of this masterpiece of a story. Here's to hoping Sabrina can work on her violent tendencies, and learn a better way to resolve a conflict.
I have a question is Izzy already chipped? I ask because I didn't see it mentioned this chapter at all.
Author's Response:
Chipped? No not in this chapter. That'll be changing sooner rather than later though.
Non violent conflict resolution just gets you flipped off by a fat jerk with a broken nose! Sooooo yeah let's hope she learns.