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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Training Day

A beautiful story.



Author's Response:

A B. E. A.uitiful comment.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6: Training Day

I like that Sabrina is taking charge. This will help izzy in the long run. I hope the mother and some teachers or whichever lady comes along gets to hold izzy. I also hope this dr smith eventually shrinks and his female assistant takes over. I enjoy this story a lot.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Yes....the long run. Her experience with Sabrina will help her in the long run..and that's it. Gloria's featured a bit more than usual next chapter soooo look out for that I guess.

And trust me your not the only one hoping "Doctor" Terrence Smith shrinks and his overworked and unpaid college intern takes over. She'd be writing term papers based on painful experiments he's used as a test subject for by nightfall if I had my way. Alas I don't control the fate of Dr. Terrence Smith. He's actually just a small Erica's house reference. Just like Small Comforts the horribly incompetent products company for shrink victims. Ask realRS what happens to him.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 6: Training Day

Oooof, bumming me out.  Great chapter, feeling sorry for Izzy and looking forward to seeing where it goes.



Author's Response:

Don't be bummed out. Izzellah had to learn! She was way too full of herself! She's "rough around the edges"....Next chapter will be significantly lighter so you can look forward to that. Gracias for the written input!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 6: Training Day

Excellent story! Normally, I'm not into cruelty, but I love the way you've presented it here. Sabrina is young. She makes mistakes, but she truly cares for her sister. Izzy on the other hand has a lot of rough edges. Fascinating to watch how you show the mental breakdown, how she eventually submits to her younger sister, accepting her fate for now.

Can't wait for next chapter!



Author's Response:

"rough around the edges?!" You insult young Izzellah my good haunted Mexican foodstuff! She's the example of respect and decorum! To anyone not directly related to her. This is a horrible situation and Sabrina is a monstrous, sugar addicted, spoiled, lucky as sin, brat who's taking advantage of her older sister's vulnerability! How dare you?! "rough around the edges." Such insolence! 

Truthfully they're both just trying their best. Wish them luck that this doesn't end horribly for all the Ivorys. Thanks to you for commenting. That's very noble of you. Not insolent at all. Some else wrote that rant above while I wasn't looking!



Author's Response:

"rough around the edges?!" You insult young Izzellah my good haunted Mexican foodstuff! She's the example of respect and decorum! To anyone not directly related to her. This is a horrible situation and Sabrina is a monstrous, sugar addicted, spoiled, lucky as sin, brat who's taking advantage of her older sister's vulnerability! How dare you?! "rough around the edges." Such insolence! 

Truthfully they're both just trying their best. Wish them luck that this doesn't end horribly for all the Ivorys. Thanks to you for commenting. That's very noble of you. Not insolent at all. Some else wrote that rant above while I wasn't looking!

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 6: Training Day

Well if there is a positive to the training is that it has allowed Izzellah and Sabrina to grow closer as siblings than they have been.



Author's Response:

I laughed harder at this comment than I should have. You're not wrong. You. Are. Not. Wrong.....Izzellah would probably hate you. No offense. Thank ya for the comment!

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