Date: July 31 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 4: Schooled
Good lord, I thought Erica had become a badass by the end but Sabrina is brutal. Looking forward to seeing if Izza is grateful for the rescue or angry at being put in that situation in the first place.
Author's Response:
Brutal?! Naaaaah. Not sweet little Izzy. What hidden overly possessive dark side? She definitely isn't learning she might slightly enjoy the misery of others or love her new little sis way more than she thought she did! Sweet, innocent, Sabrina will never change. And Izzellah's gonna be happy forever! Oh and I replied to your email....almost a year late apparently. I've been busy, but by the time you read this you've probably already read thar so I don't even know why I'm bothering to type this.....Thanks for the sweet comments. They feed me in the harsh winters of mid summer California!
Date: July 28 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 4: Schooled
Fun chapter. I like Ms. Applegate. She is disciplined. I would think that she might keep izzy on her desk sometimes.
The cage was a great idea. Love the hay. A true gerbil experience. Maybe Ms. Applegate should get a padlock that only she knows the combination to.
She will not accept fighting. Punishments all around. I like that izzy doesn't like Ms. Applegate. I doubt that attitude will serve her well.
Sometimes you just write Applegate, she should always be Ms. Applegate. I would assume that a woman of her stature at the school would expect Yes Ma'am as an answer.
This was a fun chapter. Looking forward to Thursday's a lot more now.
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Well the idea was that she went from Ms. Applegate to just Applegate cause Izzy was slowly losing respect for her. I try to keep this story in her perspective and add stuff like that. For instance she's clearly addicted to cigarettes. I don't know if this stuff shines through or just makes my writing seem inconsistent though but I'm working on it. Once again I express gratitude at your commenting proclivity!.....I probably shouldn't call her Izzy. She'd slap me.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2017 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Schooled
This story is great, I like how you didn't just jump into the shrink part but had some nice plot building. This Brenda girl seems awesome.
Author's Response:
Brenda's a nice girl. There's a bit of a secret in this chapter that will be hinted a little more next chapter. Brenda's involved in it. Not a big story thing but it'll be a nice surprise if you guess it now. Thanks an substantial amount for commenting.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 4: Schooled
Loved Erica's House, so I have to read this one! I love the relationship between Sabby and Izzy. Not too much sappy sweetness nor cold indifference. Looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response:
I don't think you HAVE to read this one. There are soooooo many flaws. Here's one Izzellah says "bullshit" a LOT! It's basically a running joke. But you can keep reading if you want. Thanks for the comment..............................AndwhenareyougonnaupdateYOUTUBE:ELI!!!!...Whoa!...sorry.
Date: July 27 2017 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 4: Schooled
I have a feeling that Sabrina will be in trouble with both the teacher as well as their mother.
Author's Response:
Hrmmm yes. That seems very likely, but here me out. What if this entire chapter was a dream! ö_ö Guess you'll have to read the next chapter to find out! Thanks for taking the time to hand out a comment to a poor story in need!....Spolier: It wasn't a dream.