Date: July 26 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: Little Sis.
Very enjoyable chapter. Love that she's scared. Who wouldn't be. Love Gloria's attitude. I am sure her threats and maybe a punishment will ensue.
Will there be a red headed teacher named Mrs. Nelson? That would be cool. Maybe a few Yes Ma'ams to her from tiny izzy. Maybe the teacher could show her to the class or keep her on or in her desk or an old gerbils cage for safety.
Author's Response:
Okay.....you actually kind of predicted something that happens next chapter. Sooo I was going to say this at the end of next chapter but I 'll just say it her now. There's a teacher in next chapter. (Obvious I know)...Her names not Mrs. Nelson sorry. If I hadn't written that chapter over a week ago I might have changed it because that's the kind of anonymous author I am!....but no. Don't give up diesel! Mrs. Nelson will exist if you believe hard enough. Thanks for the continued feedback on this exercise in mediocre storytelling!