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Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

That would be awesome. I really love your use of details, and your realism, especially considering the fact life as a flat would be nothing like you expected. Waking up one day as one of your cute friends flats would probably be hell. She would act blatantly towards her footwear. The sweltering body heat, and resultant sweat, coupled with the overwhelming odours would suck. She would go about her day completely normally, oblivious to your predicament, while you would be unable to do anything to get help. Afterall, who really parts much heed to their shoes.

Hope you've had a good summer.

Reviewer: Ethanhead258 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

So if all the footwear in the closet was the mom's past boyfriends, then did the girl morph them and why? 

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was a nice story. Have you considered writing an unaware story about being turned into a pair of old flats? I love your writing style, especially the details you Incorporated. Good luck on your next masterpieces.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it means a lot!!

And if you do have some idea of what specifically might turn you on, I suppose I might try a 'comission' - I have dabbled into roleplay (writing-wise) before, and that was fun! :) What specifically might turn you on? Who should be wearing those flats? etc.

I'm not saying I will do it, it's just a might. (Double meaning - as it is really in my power :)) ) Oh and do not contact me via email, I don't use the address. Just reply here :).

All the best!

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