[Report This]Date: June 22 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
yam yam, what a tasty plot. faved. hope to see this continued, maybe not dying too soon, maybe two or three more chapters at least? hope for some humiliating afterwards scat parts maybe of her taking a shit totally unaware of the horrors she did. hope for very cruel and detailed digestion parts too, maybe totally writing it out realistic and not too rushed with so many authors do. maybe some false hope? some very ironic parts, maybe they try to call her on the phone?
[Report This]Date: June 22 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
One of the stories I totally wish to see continued right now on here. I like unaware plots the most and nano shrinking is the best. Shrunk so small youre swimming inside a tiny cereal o loop like in honey I shrunk the kids, but even smaller, is so nice to think about. Even if she would see some speck inside the milk she wouldnt think of it much, maybe a colored speck of sugar from the ceral or fruit loops.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
loved the second chapter
[Report This]Date: June 20 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yes!! You have amazing writing skills!! The details in this story are INSANE!! You should go back and edit the chapter though, it was a bit hard to rread because of the messed up structure and lacking spaces between the lines. Loved the ending of this chapter! hope it wont contain any "hard vore" aka chewing parts though and all get swalloewed in one piece. I find hard vore parts always such a killer, it totally takes away the "good" cruel idea of getting digested alive in one piece. Maybe you could even add a cruel twist of one of them getting sucked alive in one piece into her small intestine, as the gurgling stomach exit twisted in a spastic relax, and slurped a bit of stomach content into the small intestine. Keep going amazing story!