Date: February 10 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale
Great story hope you start writing again.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale
Awesome! No other word does this story justice, except: "Awesome!"
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed reading it.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Trip
Poetic justice is always the harshest.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 9: Escape From Snake Rock (Part 2)
Man! I almost forgot: it's supper time! And, believe me; eating is the _only_ thing that would make me break off right here and now.
Author's Response: lol
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 8: Escape from Snake Rock (part 1)
Words be superfluous! ;-D
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: Another Long Journey
Heh-heh-heh! I'll bet that job isn't singing or dancing!
Great chapter, for the most part. Although, there's a typo that has Rachel answering her OWN QUESTION, after Allison finds the knapsack at the watering hole.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 6: Rebecca's Prisoner
Heh-heh-heh!
Josh probably thinks it was the Great Spirit who rescued. Then, again; why not? "Mysterious ways," as they say in the Good Book!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Journey Begins
Uh-oh! A giant, lonely widow? This won't bode well, if Stone says "no."
[Report This]Date: August 15 2007 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: Joining The Tribe
Aw! Little Josh won't be _completely_ alone? That's sweet.
Author's Response: lol thanks
[Report This]Date: August 14 2007 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale
I thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish. This was a great concept, and an attention to detail really drove it home and kept it in the time it was supposed to be. Very well done!
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: August 13 2007 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale
Very good, imaginative story.
Two suggestions for improvement of future stories:
1. Give more detail describing the experiences of the little people (sights, sounds, smells. feelings, etc.).
2. Maintain the same tense throughout the story. If told from the third person, I suggest you keep everything in past tense.
Author's Response: I'll try to remember that. thanks
Date: June 10 2007 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this story! a good and innovative plot, very well written. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you...I really appreciate all the great reviews
[Report This]Date: May 27 2007 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 4: Joining The Tribe
This is really a differnet story then i first thought it was going ot be when reading it. I am really enjoying where you took this one. It's nice to see a story that isnt just another gts story.
Author's Response: thank you...a review from you is like being Knighted by the Queen.
Date: May 22 2007 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: Tortured
Good story line.
Good lead-up, but in the end just a a quick description of the outcomes for these five men.
No sex. Disappointing...
Author's Response: patience fellow reader, patience
[Report This]Date: May 13 2007 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Captured and Shrunk
What a great start to a story. Wonderful imagination. Great setting, and great situation!
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Many, many exciting possibilities!
Author's Response: thank you. ch. 3 coming soon