Reviewer: Benja999 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2018 3:26 PM Title: Road safety is important

Really good story!

 

I like your writingstyle in almost all your story pls keep going!

There are so few talented writers who are willing to write scat stuff.

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2017 2:00 PM Title: Road safety is important

Personally I dislike the underage content, hence the reduced rating, but I still think there's some brilliant ideas here amongst the adults. I loved the bit with the yoga chick communicating with the tiny victims trapped in her nether regions, although I would have personally prefered them to have been left somewhere less raunchy. I also love how the truck driver was left to fall into the depths of insanity trapped under a sole large enough to crush a metropolis.

 

I hope to see a follow up on the escaping woman from the bank robbery. I imagine her being captured by a couple of pretty ladies who recognize her predicament and opt to make her their foot slave/explorer as she gradually dwindles away.

 

I think rabbithole's idea would fit nicely into the storyline. My idea along these lines would be something like a group of cheerleaders slowly shrinking an entire stadium into oblivion during a big event and having their way with the players and patrons as they "grow" from 10 foot amazons all the way up to solar masses and beyond. Some of them would be wearing sneakers or boots, others would have flip flops with fancy pedicures, nail art, toe rings, anklets, tattoos, scented lotion... They'd all go dancing around putting on a sexy show, comparing sizes and crushing, toying with their slowly diminishing victims as they come to eventually dwarf the very stadium itself, slipping in and out of their sandals and giving new meaning to the term "foot ball".

 

Or similarly along those lines: A gorgeous college freshman gets a new car from her parents as a reward for finishing high school. Together with her equally attractive friend, she decides to shrink an entire office tower and make the workers give them pedicures before they dwindle out of sight. At first it looks like the task will be completed in due time and their lives will be spared, but they soon find that the workload increases substantially as they get smaller, and it becomes a race against the clock, both for survival and for basic human dignity.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was actually probably not going to continue too much of this story but your review gave me a bit more motivation. However, I think you might be mistaken on the "underage content". The only underage content I can remember is the child who gives the truck to the mother. All other characters are at least 17 and most are well into adulthood. But anyway, your ideas are quite interesting. Your stadium idea is especially good and I can see a lot of fun can be had with it. However, I might save it for a later chapter since it's very "big". Meaning a lot happens. An entire stadium disappears? That would grab a lot of attention. I might do a few smaller chapters (Maybe a teacher doing stuff, maybe the idea with the shrinking girl in her car) before tackling a major event. I can see you have quite a thing for feet and foot related things. I have done a bit with butt and scat so maybe I'll give feet a go since I can also get behind that idea. Maybe an ex-girlfriend takes revenge on her ex and his new partner or something. Something small like that. But your stadium idea is definitely floating around now =) Thanks again for such a detailed review. You've given me a lot to think about.

Reviewer: vanderband Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2017 8:21 PM Title: Road safety is important

I enjoyed the second chapter and the second alt ending for the thrid chapter, they were short, but detailed enough that it still made for a good scene, It also demonstrated how nonchalant the women are about their power and how willing they are to torture people with a simple act such as farting or a bowel movement.

I hope there will be more farting/scat scene in the upcoming chapters, personally I would love to see a story about a teacher that is in chagre of detention that punishes the students by shrinking them. Once she shruck them she would kill them off either by farting on them or unloading her bowels watching in amusement as they try to out run her growing pile of crap and failing.

Author's Response: Well, with me, you know there's always going to be scat/fart/bowel scenes thrown in every so often. Everyone seems to enjoy the teacher idea and are coming up with their own little teacher examples. I'll need to kick it into high gear and do a teacher scene. Gotta give the people what they want =)

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2017 11:47 AM Title: Road safety is important

The entrapment chapter was brilliant. I'd really love to see the same kind of thing, maybe with a schoolgirl. Under her finger/toenails, in her navel, in her ears or nose, or in the wrinkles of her anus, any would be great.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2017 3:24 AM Title: Road safety is important

There's a red haired woman at the bank named Mrs. Nelson, she wears tan 2 3/4 inch pumps. She is a wonderful woman, who I adore.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2017 9:51 PM Title: Road safety is important

A happy ending, once in a while, would broaden that variety.

Author's Response: I will be honest: I always found happy endings to be very boring and uninteresting and hated it when a story did it. I prefer the dark, horrible endings. But I might be able to make a happy ending just for you. But I warn you, it shall be quite boring.

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2017 10:52 AM Title: Road safety is important

I loved this chapter, I am so glad to see you writing again. The size scale was so amazing and brought a great vivid image to my mind. This tiny truck driver was nothing compared to Susan who was basically a goddess compared to him. YOu do so great with these size scales, continue with more like this.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2017 3:28 AM Title: Road safety is important

Signing Diesel is a habit. I am not listed as Diesel everywhere. Like on Deviant Art. So I just sign Diesel as a habit.

Author's Response: Fair point.

Reviewer: LtShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 4:31 PM Title: Road safety is important

Just been a really long time since the last update. Would love to see more of it. And this story is also amazing!

Author's Response: It is one of my greatest faults. Almost none of my stories get finished since I get bored with them. With DATP, I just ran out of ideas and the main idea of unaware giantesses at a pool didn't interest me anymore. But I still hope to keep people entertained with future stories filled with interesting scenarios.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 10:53 AM Title: Road safety is important

I would had loved it way more, if the boy had accidentally stepped on the car reducing it to a thin paper flat foil under his sneaker.. oops. Or him had swallowed it. I like male interactions same as much, so would be nice seeing this maybe in a future plot? Maybe some older character some teenagers around 16 step on a car or think it's a bug or it ends in a candy bag with colorful m&m and gets swallowed. that would be hot

Author's Response: Yeah, but then the story would be super short =)