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Reviewer: aquarius24 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2022 1:26 PM Title: Alyssa's Discovery

Loved the toilet bowl chapter! Made me wet as hell!

Reviewer: Gizmo2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 4:04 PM Title: Alyssa's Discovery

Incredible :) Can't wait for more. The way you wrote this, the desperation of the tiny person. The ass part was such a tease :p I hope there's more of that to come. I understand if it isn't your thing but I'd love it if you were to write a big fart into one of your chapters too! :p

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 6:11 AM Title: Alyssa's Discovery

  I really liked the detailed discription of her - so easy to picture her - switching perspectives and detailing the event  from different angles, I was hoping that there was more shrinkees trapped in there and she would discover several of her friends to rescue, while at the same time, getting the revenge that she so badly wanted.

  Yeah, continue this, or start another one. Nice work!

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 12:59 AM Title: Alyssa's Discovery

Interesting start. Will there be more?

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