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Reviewer: spgts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Daddy Issues

I'm ready. Twist me up.

Julie is becoming truly huge now. Love it. A lot of the more longform slow growth stories end up with the growee at about the 6'6''/6'7''. So glad she's gone beyond that.

Liked the family backstory stuff and the revelations about Sam and Julie's high school relationship. We learn that the girls father was a giant himself so that casts a little doubt on the inversion table growth theory. Maybe it's just a late growth spurt and the inversion table is a placebo? Did the inversion table work on Jill? Stuff to look forward to. I like the idea of Julie being the only giant but I also like the idea of others growing. I know it'll be good either way though.

Another thing I appreciate is that thus far each chapter has been pretty substantial. You can really dig in to each part. Smaller chapters would be okay as well, but the larger chunks are very much appreciated.

Great work littless. This is one of those stories that has me checking back on the daily to see if the next part has been uploaded.

Author's Response:

spgts,

Thanks again. As for the questions you have, you'll just have to wait and see. A agree, the chapters are bit long. The first few drafts were twice as long for most of the chapters. I cut lots of stuff out. It's hard to keep track of what is not there anymore when editing subsequent chapters. Such is the trade of the writer, huh?

However, I have another story I'm working on which is very different than this one. The chapters for that one are much shorter; most under 2500 words. The size relationships are also different and it is told in third person. There is a message in it that is pretty obvious, unlike here where the message is developed slowly.

As for the twist in the next chapter, you'll have to wait but I'll give you all a little teaser: it is dark.

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