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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Erin

the story was to long and drawn out and still went no where he seems very gullable



Author's Response:

bailey69,

The story's not over yet -- it's even more long and drawn out. Yes, Sam is gullible.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Erin

Joke's on you. I was expecting cringe. I got cringe.

Author's Response:

chrlorez,

Thanks, I guess. Do you want cringe? If so, did you like?

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Erin

Ah Ha Ha, I love Erin! She sounds so funny when she's drunk!  And, Zhoolee too!  Damn Sam!  Retiring to the bedroom with your little sister staying over...

Hm, I don't know 'bout this...  sounds a bit 'Kinky', to say the least! But, it's definitely HOT!  ;`)



Author's Response:

midnight,

Thanks again. Yes, HOT is one of the things I'm going for. Just one; there are several more that will work it's way out as the story goes on.

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