[Report This]Date: May 22 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Truth Laid Bare
Great story! The character development is world class. It will be interesting how she takes control. I wonder if she still loves him? How much will she control? Will she be with other men? Can't wait for more updates.
Author's Response:
Hank,
That's exactly what Sam's feeling. Thanks for the feedback.
Date: May 21 2017 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Truth Laid Bare
Thank's Man! I don't really have any formal writing experience, as you've probably noticed by now, but I do like the way that this site works. Allowing anyone to just get their thoughts down, and have a permanent place to record their work - who knows, my random free-writing might get better, and I could have it professionally edited later on after it's finished. I've read multitudes of stories from hundreds of different authors on this particular type of fantasy/fetish and I've dutifully selected everything that I thought was outstanding about those certain ones, and kept note of it.
I try and incorporate certain scenes into my own and blend them all together, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, ...I just keep on free writing and moving ahead with new ideas.
That's what it's all about, for me, I guess... It is what it is! ;`)
Author's Response:
Sounds good to me.
Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2017 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Truth Laid Bare
Yep, so it's all out in the open now, ...that elephant in the room, and all that, yep, I said it was going to be a real, 'eye-opener' - and, there it is... She's slowly getting bigger!
...and, the sloo ow torture continues... oh yeah! I love it! I think that you've' mastered' the fine art of Subtlety And there definitely is an art to it, you know, and you've got it down, Man! ;`)
Author's Response:
mignight,
Thanks, man. I just discovered DaiOnna and am making my way through it. I had no idea that was you. I kept seeing it pop up in "resents" but the size isn't my thing, so, I hadn't read it. You're really good with description. This is great feedback from an accomplished writer here. I'm honored.