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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

  So deeply thought-out; to provoke something dwelling within us all...  I felt as though she, had no real idea of their minimal existence, their ultimate affection, their complete and utter sacrifice... Their unending servitude, to this magnificent being  - looming above them like some Monolithic Goddess... merely seeking to use them in the most thoughtless and menial ways, to devour them without any indifference. 

  ....makes me think of my Highschool!  And, my teen years, all over again...  ;`)  

  Great Stuff!  


Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That's exactly what I wanted to convey here, I'm really glad it's seeping through the words :).


Highschool, and teen years, are the paramount era in development. I too wrote this story remembering one of my high school crushes... Back then I viewed women as unobtainable, distant, and serene. And she was (probably is) a bookworm as well, that's where the inspiration laid. I'm thinking of raising a long-overdue request of a flat-based story from that very same cave of memories, when I finally get to it :). So, we might perhaps see more of her on this site... :).


Thank you again.


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