Date: May 13 2017 6:04 AM Title: Better days
I clicked this story because of the boob and nano tags, but after reading it, I can't help but feel that you used the wrong size tag for this story—unless the fox doll is at most 1/2 inch or 1 centimeter tall. But I doubt that. I feel misled.
I would like it if you took more care in writing your works. There are resources online for how to write stories, and there are other erotic size fetish works on sites like this one that could serve as a basis for how to at least compose what you are writing for your specified target audience. Everyone has to start somewhere, but you need to put more effort into what you post here so people can be more specific in their critique when they review what you have written.
Author's Response: Thank you for your opinion. O and ny the way i am planning to continue this story so technologically it is only misleading now. But sorry you were displeased
Date: May 11 2017 4:58 AM Title: Better days
A pretty sparse story with a lot going on. One mistake I found was that the story began on a Sunday but then the next morning was a Friday. Still, has me a bit interested, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you and now i know my mistake. Please keep reviewing my future content and read my stories