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Reviewer: mad dog Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: My Foolish Brother

I hated the son I thought he was hateful, spoiled brate I  add least want to care about the character but I couldn't 

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Date: December 01 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab


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Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab

pls write more

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab

well tha fact about a nun being tall being your big sis and her having an odor problem its rlly original, i luv this.

though i hope to see more from margaret and her stewing hot black pumps

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab

Well This is my first review,sorry if it sucks >.<

I feel that the relationship between Alex,his sister grew too fast?Other then that I really enjoyed the story especially the parts where his sister teases him.

I hope the story will be continued soon :)

Author's Response:

In no way your review sucked by the way. 

Yes, the relationship beteen Alex and his sister did grow pretty fast. I tried to make the reason for that due to his gullible personality, which due to his personality, alot of ill-minded things will happen to him later in the story. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: My Foolish Brother

the story is hard to make much sence expect  he was a spoiled  brate' I did'nt like the character at all or the plot,it wasn't very good.

Author's Response: Thanks! I will put up another story up for you later tomorrow, hopefully it will be interesting for you. Also, the story Becoming A Family probably will not get nitty gritty until the next three chapters. Again, thanks for the review!

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