Date: February 16 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: My Foolish Brother
I hated the son I thought he was hateful, spoiled brate I add least want to care about the character but I couldn't
Author's Response: The point is not too LoL his character is spoiled purposefully to make the situations he go through not considered irrational or that it happens to him for no particular reason. His attitude and view on life puts him haphazardly into ill situations.
Date: June 01 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab
well tha fact about a nun being tall being your big sis and her having an odor problem its rlly original, i luv this.
though i hope to see more from margaret and her stewing hot black pumps
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: May 18 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab
Well This is my first review,sorry if it sucks >.<
I feel that the relationship between Alex,his sister grew too fast?Other then that I really enjoyed the story especially the parts where his sister teases him.
I hope the story will be continued soon :)
In no way your review sucked by the way.
Yes, the relationship beteen Alex and his sister did grow pretty fast. I tried to make the reason for that due to his gullible personality, which due to his personality, alot of ill-minded things will happen to him later in the story. Thanks for the review.
Date: May 14 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: My Foolish Brother
the story is hard to make much sence expect he was a spoiled brate' I did'nt like the character at all or the plot,it wasn't very good.
Author's Response: Thanks! I will put up another story up for you later tomorrow, hopefully it will be interesting for you. Also, the story Becoming A Family probably will not get nitty gritty until the next three chapters. Again, thanks for the review!