Date: May 19 2017 6:46 AM Title: Prologue
Really enjoyed the story! The only thing I wish you had included was maybe having mayi begin to enjoy her feet, like Jie hinted in the first few chapters, maybe her feet would eventually be one of his "gifts" haha.
Still really loved the writing style and action, great story!
The story isn't over, yet. I might even finish it today if I have the time.
Date: May 15 2017 4:52 AM Title: Good and Bad
Enjoyable action so far. I hope you maintain her personality similarly in the rest of the story, with this mixture of sweetness and control.
Hey sorry this is late, but I just realised who left this review! I am stoked that you enjoyed it, you are a bit of a legend in my eyes.
Date: May 15 2017 1:51 AM Title: Prologue
I really like the Asian woman dominates white guy setting. Maybe she could emphasize more that she sees white guys as way beneath her? Also hope she will stay "dirty" and make him worship more than just her feet in the future.;)
You may check some of the spelling though. There were a couple of very noticeable mistakes; e.g. "here" instead of "hear".
Date: May 12 2017 11:46 PM Title: Prologue
"this is your role in life. It is okay, you can spend time with my feet, you might like it eventually."
Oooh I hope he does ;) interesting idea, it's like breaking the tiny's mind, making him get a fetish or something haha. Love the story so far! Keep it coming :)
Date: May 11 2017 1:52 PM Title: Prologue
I love this story, especially the aspect of a cute Asian girl kidnapping and forcing you to submit to her will. I love the details, especially the repulsive realism, and am looking forward to more sensory descriptions. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: May 09 2017 2:54 PM Title: Prologue
Not bad, so far.
Chapters are a bit short and jumpy, but it works out on getting to the point.
Looking forward to more.