Date: June 24 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 Bedtime 3
I can understand how the lack of reviews/feedback can be discouraging. I think it's just the nature of the internet combined with this being fetish material. People are mostly here to get off and get on with things. I have been guilty of that myself for a decade plus at this point. It's only recently that I've started to pipe up and give my two cents when I enjoy someone's work. I actually feel really lucky that I happen to share this particular fetish arena with so many talented content creators like yourself. I encourage anyone who hasn't registered and is reading this review to do so and throw a kind word to madeofwin and others whose work you enjoy. It's easy, quick and could inspire your favorite author to create more work that you enjoy.
Anyway, Allison (and How I lost My Wife) is definitely still one of the stories that is currently drawing me back to this site day after day. It's right in the sweet spot for me in many ways. I really like the verbal stuff. All the "shorty's" and whatnot. Good to see the infamous Blake virus is still thriving as well.
Of course, I don't know what your plan is for the story but if I had to offer a suggestion it would be to see others reactions to Allisons and her brothers new sizes/their transformation. Or just more scenes in the outside world in general.
Really looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't know about discouraged, I just don't feel the urge to continue sharing something people don't seem to enjoy. I'll usually move off of that onto something else, or even take a break.
Currently, John has three women in his life. Allison, his girlfriend, and his neighbor. So reactions are going to happen as with this last chapter we've fleshed out how the siblings got here. Next we get to see what John's day to day looks like.