Date: May 09 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Do hate women,you make karen a ugly slob . why do that, you could've made sam a whole lot less boring,he was such a cry baby
Author's Response: Yes, I'm a rampant misogynist. You got me. 🙄 It says BBW in the tags. If you don't like that, don't read it. It's implied that Karen's otherwise quite good looking outside of age and weight, ergo having been a successful Vegas stripper. Also, Sam was a crybaby because his mom got trashed and shoved him inside of herself. But whatever. Thanks for the review.
Date: May 08 2017 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
With Karen's delusional narcissism and Amanda's selfish manipulation, this really didn't have to be unaware. I bet Karen would take it as a personal triumph if she "convinced" Sam to straddle Amanda's cock and let her blow them both at the same time.
I never get tired of tiny whimpers. Amanda's surging cockhead, bigger than Sam's own head, is terrifying and wonderful. I hope she gets to watch Sam slide out.
I don't think Karen's necessarily a narcissist. Delusional, sure. And desperate. Desperate to be delusional. But she still loves her son more than anything--except getting high.
The unaware nature of that scene was part of the comission, but I think there's pretty clear evidence that Amanda looks past it in order to continue getting laid. I tried to make the future of the nature of the three's relationship fairly clear, though it won't be gone into detail as the story reached its end here (sad, I know). I tried to make the metaphor that Amanda is willing to fuck Sam over by catering to her own interests above all else clear, to give that final sex scene some heavy symbolism in what it means for the future.
Date: May 06 2017 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
“I don’t blame you if you want to get the hell out of her" My favorite typo so far.
I suppose being a good sex worker includes identifying others' deepest unspoken desires, but that doesn't make Amanda any less of a shit for exploiting both Karen and Sam. Getting Karen clean would "crush her heart" because she would miss sex-tripping?
Of course, after Saturday night all will be forgiven. You want a hit, Sam?
I saw that typo reading over this chapter today and part of me almost doesn't want to fix it.
And, yeah, Amanda's selfishness in combination with Karen's carelesness/obliviousness is a horrible combination.
Date: May 04 2017 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
And a nice shame-inducing jizz to slide us home. And you're not done yet, Sammy-boy. If I shared an apartment with Amanda, I'd be dying for a glimpse, too.
Sam and Amanda sitting in a tree, J-I-Z-Z-I-N-G
Date: May 04 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good stuff, good stuff. The 40+ gts is kind of new to me, but I think I actually like it now that you're writing about it! If I may ask, where does this interest in mature women come from?
Stay cool and keep writing!
For me, I personally really like giantesses that are plus sized and older because it adds to the domination aspect for me. And someone else agreed enough to commission these characters! :)
Date: May 03 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Forgive me, I was just extrapolating from Amber's crowd.
Sam's condition must be considered pathetic and boring if all of his peers decided to "forget" him. I suspect somebody must have run the numbers and figured out that he should be easily grababble these days.
However, it's not my commission...
Ah, that's touched on in chapter 3. The whole thing's 4 chapters and written already, but I'm going to put it out one day at a time. I felt putting Tammy all out at once was not in my best interests for GiantessWorld fame. ;P
Date: May 03 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
While Karen and Amanda are a bit reckless and lacking in foresight, they are above average in compassion (for your characters) in that neither of them seems to have considered trying to leverage Sam's condition to make money. Fortunately, pharmaceuticals are known to expand one's horizons.
Speaking of expanded horizons, I'm fully on board and looking forward to Sam's descent. I wonder what Stacy's up to now?
Karen would NEVER hurt her son (for profit)! How dare you imply such a thing!
Explain the Stacy joke?