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Reviewer: allwaysman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2017 5:00 AM Title: Momas unaware love

Great start and I know you want to keep them short to start but more detail the more interesting keep going want more! 



Author's Response: Thank you and i will happily make more. If you need more to read i have other stories

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 10:46 PM Title: Momas unaware love

Good start.

Don't leave us hanging.



Author's Response: Thanks for the support, and i will continue this onward thanks to your support

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 7:57 PM Title: Momas unaware love

are you new on here? its hard to begin writing I know, but maybe try to focus on structure your next chapters. also maybe try to write them longer.



Author's Response: Sorry i know, and i am new but i am going to keep them short for a while till i can get used to it. Thank you for the input

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