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Reviewer: Ethanhead258 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 2:38 PM Title: While they sleep pt2

I loved the shit scene 

Reviewer: thebestthing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 6:37 PM Title: While they sleep

Maybe an idea is they all have sex but this idea sounds to disgusting.

 

 

What do you think?



Author's Response: I agree sex is a good idea, but i think i will add a really agressive character later on like chapter 8,9,10 to cause serious sex, lesbian go down

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 7:58 PM Title: Feet ,friend and her ass

chapters are way too shot in my opppinion, maybe try to put a bit more time into them



Author's Response: I know i didnt realize how long these chapters really are until i sarted writing. I will try to make them bigger but please keep watching over my content

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