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Reviewer: Aiame Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Um, good idea. A nice story in general but it was really difficult to read. Adding punctuation and fixing/adding syntax would be a great start. This story kinda seems like it was written while the author was half asleep or in a hurry to do some other important thing.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2007 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was a nice short story i like that the man is playing the role of the giant in this story i don't see to much stories like this one around hear nice to see and read something difrent around hear for once. Also i don't mind if something like that would to me because i need a girlfrend. BUY

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